Lovers at A Wintry Distance

I saw your face

within the crowd,

beyond the maple tree.

The snow was firm,

the day was cold.

I felt my heart

pick up a beat,

my eyes were sparkling


The air turned brisk,

the wind struck free.

I felt your gaze

snow over me.

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